Dear Students,
click on HERE and read all entries under Memo Samples and Poster Samples. Analize them in terms of coherence and cohesion, grammar, situation (context of situation). Award them a mark (1-10 scale) and justify it.
Anahí
Nationalities
1 year ago
I choose Memo Sample 4 and I award it a mark of nine. Its tone and diction are appropriate. Besides. the recommendation is clear and it provides specific reasons to support it. Moreover, there are not any spelling, grammar or punctuation mistakes. It observes the correct manuscript conventions except for the one-inch margins on all sides.
ReplyDeleteAs regards posters, the one I liked most was poster 4 because the recommendation is clear. it contains vivid language and it uses good design elements. Moreover, this poster has a tone and diction appropriate for high students. I award it a 10.
Cheeps
In my opinion,sample number 4 is not only one of the most coherent and cohesive, but also is in due accordance with most of the points that were supposed to be taken into account to do the task. For instance,the poster presents a tone and diction appropiate for the audience and the recommendation is by far clear. Besides it has good design elements,such as effective use of colour or appropiate and and compatible graphics which really makes it vivid.
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I consider memo sample 4 to be the most cohesive and coherent. I think that its recommendations are very clear and well supported. In addition, I think there are not spelling, grammar or punctuation mistakes.
ReplyDeleteAs regards posters, I think poster 4 is the best. Its is well organizanized. It presents diction, which is in accordance for high level students, and I think it is great. Moreover, Sample 4 is designed with elements that catch the readers attention, such as colours, appropiate graphics that make the posters really attractive to the readers. Besides it is in accordance to the requisites expressed in the instructions.
Angels.
We have chosen the sample number one (Memo) for these reasons:
ReplyDelete• It is written in a formal tone which is the appropriate for the audience, the principal.
• As regards the clearness of the recommendation, it is well-organised and easy to understand.
• It is plenty of supporting information about each item
• The text is well-organised, using the correct connectors as well as the distribution of the paragraphs
• It is a good resource the use of the vignette in order to catch the readers’ attention. In addition, the second kind of vignettes is used to summarise the main reasons to convince the readers to choose this dictionary.
We have chosen the poster number three because of the following reasons:
• As regards the title, the choice of words is the appropriate for the audience, in big letters, a kind of hook that interests the students in this dictionary.
• The use of witty remarks as well as pictures is very helpful for this kind of audience.
• In connection with the colours, they are the proper ones because they do not affect the sight taking into account that they are soft colours.
• It is a good summary of the main reasons to choose this dictionary; besides, it is all the information in a sheet of paper, allowing an accessible distribution among students.
Sky and Atlantis
From my point of view, I consider that poster number 2 is the one I liked most because the recommendation is exceptionally clear. For instance, the poster is very well organized. Its diction is in accordance for the students who are going to use it. Moreover, the use of attractive design elements catch the students´attention. As regards memos, I have chosen the memo sample number 2. I think the recommendation is very easy to understand. It provides specific reasons to support it. Besides, the punctucation, the spelling,the coherence and the cohesion are correct.
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